Subah hoti hai kab aur kab raat hoti hai
ilm kisi baat ka ab to kabhi nai hota hai...
yaad aati hai teri har pal,
aur teri yaad me har pal ye dil rota hai...
tut chuke hain aaj sab vaade sab kasme
fir bhi na jaane ye dil kyo wo khwab sanjota hai...
Milne ki aas liye hue hai ye dil,
aur is aas me har pal ye dil rota hai...
aaj bhi gunjti hai kaano me wo madhur aawaz
jis aawaz ko sun ye man khota hai..
kaanto bhari is raah par chal raha hai dil,
aur is raah me har pal ye dil rota hai...
-Rajiv Ranjan
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2 comments:
pehli do line likhi to sahi par grammar thoda thik karna tha..one is hoti hai n second is hota hai
grammar is ok bro bt its not that much matching to the rythm.. anyhow i ll try to put perfection next time.. this was my first attempt ever to write anything... Anyhow thanx for pointing out.. :)
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